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Ben B
post Mar 7 2006, 09:55 PM
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post Mar 7 2006, 10:51 PM
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post Mar 8 2006, 06:22 AM
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post Mar 8 2006, 06:34 AM
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post Mar 8 2006, 01:43 PM
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QUOTE (BIG-B @ Mar 7 2006, 04:55 PM)
THIS IS FROM THE POINT OF VIEW OF AN OLDER MAN TALKIN TO HIS "SON". I THINK THE CONCEPT IS OK BUT IM NOT SURE IF I REALLY PULLED IT OFF, FEEDBACK??


On the night you were born,
My lips smiled but my heart was torn,
It was 9:58 when your lungs filled up,
I saw you at 10 and my eyes filled up,
I thought I could handle this,
Everybody said I shouldn’t stand for this,
But your mother meant too much to me,
6 years together since age 14,
Once I met her no one else could compete,
Over the years she became my heartbeat,
18 years old when we decided to get married,
Testing times, neither family was happy,
“Why settle down when you’re both so young?”
“Don’t take this step when your life’s just begun”
But the love between us was deep in many ways,
Separated in a past life, put back together one day,
I found a job while your mum finished school,
We got our own place and everything was going cool,
A year later something happened, your mother changed,
Her confidence had gone and her eyes seemed glazed,
She sat me down, as I’m sitting here with you,
Revealing what went on, I didn’t know what to do,
“That Saturday about 3 months ago,
the night I went shopping, you were too sick to go,
I couldn’t find a space so I parked down the street,
but when I got back to the car, I couldn’t find my keys,
with my head in my bag, a hand grabbed me from behind,
I was too scared to move, but I was screaming in my mind,
he dragged me out of sight and pinned my body to the ground,
reached up my skirt and pulled my panties down”
We both broke down in tears, she pulled me tight against her breast,
Of all my greatest fears, I never could have guessed,
She pushed my head away and said she wasn’t done,
But nothing could prepare me for what was about to come,
“I’ve only told my sister, and we went to the police,
but I’ve been feeling ill for the past 2 weeks,
so I went to the doctor and he ran some tests,
I’m pregnant” The final knife pierced my chest,
I hoped and I prayed but I just knew,
It wasn’t mine, and the baby was you,
“I’m keeping the baby, I can’t kill a child”
I wrecked the house that night I just went wild,
The next day we sat and spent it talking,
It boiled down to either I support her, or I start walking,
I left her for a while as I got my head together,
Remembering our wedding vows “unconditionally forever”
I told her that I would raise you as my own,
That we would never again discuss that night in our home,
You were never to be told, so many secrets so many lies,
But as you turn into a man I see "that man" in your eyes,
I love you, you are my son, we’ve shared tears and we’ve shared laughter,
It breaks my heart to say this, but son I’m not your father.

nicegoing.gif

Id like to see that concept on a rap album, we dont get quality ideas like that in the mainstream.


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post Mar 8 2006, 03:55 PM
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QUOTE (Radames @ Mar 8 2006, 01:43 PM)
QUOTE (BIG-B @ Mar 7 2006, 04:55 PM)
THIS IS FROM THE POINT OF VIEW OF AN OLDER MAN TALKIN TO HIS "SON". I THINK THE CONCEPT IS OK BUT IM NOT SURE IF I REALLY PULLED IT OFF, FEEDBACK??


On the night you were born,
My lips smiled but my heart was torn,
It was 9:58 when your lungs filled up,
I saw you at 10 and my eyes filled up,
I thought I could handle this,
Everybody said I shouldn’t stand for this,
But your mother meant too much to me,
6 years together since age 14,
Once I met her no one else could compete,
Over the years she became my heartbeat,
18 years old when we decided to get married,
Testing times, neither family was happy,
“Why settle down when you’re both so young?”
“Don’t take this step when your life’s just begun”
But the love between us was deep in many ways,
Separated in a past life, put back together one day,
I found a job while your mum finished school,
We got our own place and everything was going cool,
A year later something happened, your mother changed,
Her confidence had gone and her eyes seemed glazed,
She sat me down, as I’m sitting here with you,
Revealing what went on, I didn’t know what to do,
“That Saturday about 3 months ago,
the night I went shopping, you were too sick to go,
I couldn’t find a space so I parked down the street,
but when I got back to the car, I couldn’t find my keys,
with my head in my bag, a hand grabbed me from behind,
I was too scared to move, but I was screaming in my mind,
he dragged me out of sight and pinned my body to the ground,
reached up my skirt and pulled my panties down”
We both broke down in tears, she pulled me tight against her breast,
Of all my greatest fears, I never could have guessed,
She pushed my head away and said she wasn’t done,
But nothing could prepare me for what was about to come,
“I’ve only told my sister, and we went to the police,
but I’ve been feeling ill for the past 2 weeks,
so I went to the doctor and he ran some tests,
I’m pregnant” The final knife pierced my chest,
I hoped and I prayed but I just knew,
It wasn’t mine, and the baby was you,
“I’m keeping the baby, I can’t kill a child”
I wrecked the house that night I just went wild,
The next day we sat and spent it talking,
It boiled down to either I support her, or I start walking,
I left her for a while as I got my head together,
Remembering our wedding vows “unconditionally forever”
I told her that I would raise you as my own,
That we would never again discuss that night in our home,
You were never to be told, so many secrets so many lies,
But as you turn into a man I see "that man" in your eyes,
I love you, you are my son, we’ve shared tears and we’ve shared laughter,
It breaks my heart to say this, but son I’m not your father.

nicegoing.gif

Id like to see that concept on a rap album, we dont get quality ideas like that in the mainstream.

Nah, just leave it and take it for what it is, people always want to mesh things into Hiphop and that's when it gets spoiled (sometimes)

That was dope though nicegoing.gif nicegoing.gif Keep writing B !
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post Mar 8 2006, 03:59 PM
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QUOTE (Shenzo @ Mar 8 2006, 10:55 AM)
QUOTE (Radames @ Mar 8 2006, 01:43 PM)
QUOTE (BIG-B @ Mar 7 2006, 04:55 PM)
THIS IS FROM THE POINT OF VIEW OF AN OLDER MAN TALKIN TO HIS "SON". I THINK THE CONCEPT IS OK BUT IM NOT SURE IF I REALLY PULLED IT OFF, FEEDBACK??


On the night you were born,
My lips smiled but my heart was torn,
It was 9:58 when your lungs filled up,
I saw you at 10 and my eyes filled up,
I thought I could handle this,
Everybody said I shouldn’t stand for this,
But your mother meant too much to me,
6 years together since age 14,
Once I met her no one else could compete,
Over the years she became my heartbeat,
18 years old when we decided to get married,
Testing times, neither family was happy,
“Why settle down when you’re both so young?”
“Don’t take this step when your life’s just begun”
But the love between us was deep in many ways,
Separated in a past life, put back together one day,
I found a job while your mum finished school,
We got our own place and everything was going cool,
A year later something happened, your mother changed,
Her confidence had gone and her eyes seemed glazed,
She sat me down, as I’m sitting here with you,
Revealing what went on, I didn’t know what to do,
“That Saturday about 3 months ago,
the night I went shopping, you were too sick to go,
I couldn’t find a space so I parked down the street,
but when I got back to the car, I couldn’t find my keys,
with my head in my bag, a hand grabbed me from behind,
I was too scared to move, but I was screaming in my mind,
he dragged me out of sight and pinned my body to the ground,
reached up my skirt and pulled my panties down”
We both broke down in tears, she pulled me tight against her breast,
Of all my greatest fears, I never could have guessed,
She pushed my head away and said she wasn’t done,
But nothing could prepare me for what was about to come,
“I’ve only told my sister, and we went to the police,
but I’ve been feeling ill for the past 2 weeks,
so I went to the doctor and he ran some tests,
I’m pregnant” The final knife pierced my chest,
I hoped and I prayed but I just knew,
It wasn’t mine, and the baby was you,
“I’m keeping the baby, I can’t kill a child”
I wrecked the house that night I just went wild,
The next day we sat and spent it talking,
It boiled down to either I support her, or I start walking,
I left her for a while as I got my head together,
Remembering our wedding vows “unconditionally forever”
I told her that I would raise you as my own,
That we would never again discuss that night in our home,
You were never to be told, so many secrets so many lies,
But as you turn into a man I see "that man" in your eyes,
I love you, you are my son, we’ve shared tears and we’ve shared laughter,
It breaks my heart to say this, but son I’m not your father.

nicegoing.gif

Id like to see that concept on a rap album, we dont get quality ideas like that in the mainstream.

Nah, just leave it and take it for what it is, people always want to mesh things into Hiphop and that's when it gets spoiled (sometimes)

That was dope though nicegoing.gif nicegoing.gif Keep writing B !

no, I wanna see a rapper do it, I didnt say B has to.


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post Mar 8 2006, 05:35 PM
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QUOTE (BIG-B @ Mar 7 2006, 04:55 PM)
THIS IS FROM THE POINT OF VIEW OF AN OLDER MAN TALKIN TO HIS "SON". I THINK THE CONCEPT IS OK BUT IM NOT SURE IF I REALLY PULLED IT OFF, FEEDBACK??


On the night you were born,
My lips smiled but my heart was torn,
It was 9:58 when your lungs filled up,
I saw you at 10 and my eyes filled up,
I thought I could handle this,
Everybody said I shouldn’t stand for this,
But your mother meant too much to me,
6 years together since age 14,
Once I met her no one else could compete,
Over the years she became my heartbeat,
18 years old when we decided to get married,
Testing times, neither family was happy,
“Why settle down when you’re both so young?”
“Don’t take this step when your life’s just begun”
But the love between us was deep in many ways,
Separated in a past life, put back together one day,
I found a job while your mum finished school,
We got our own place and everything was going cool,
A year later something happened, your mother changed,
Her confidence had gone and her eyes seemed glazed,
She sat me down, as I’m sitting here with you,
Revealing what went on, I didn’t know what to do,
“That Saturday about 3 months ago,
the night I went shopping, you were too sick to go,
I couldn’t find a space so I parked down the street,
but when I got back to the car, I couldn’t find my keys,
with my head in my bag, a hand grabbed me from behind,
I was too scared to move, but I was screaming in my mind,
he dragged me out of sight and pinned my body to the ground,
reached up my skirt and pulled my panties down”
We both broke down in tears, she pulled me tight against her breast,
Of all my greatest fears, I never could have guessed,
She pushed my head away and said she wasn’t done,
But nothing could prepare me for what was about to come,
“I’ve only told my sister, and we went to the police,
but I’ve been feeling ill for the past 2 weeks,
so I went to the doctor and he ran some tests,
I’m pregnant” The final knife pierced my chest,
I hoped and I prayed but I just knew,
It wasn’t mine, and the baby was you,
“I’m keeping the baby, I can’t kill a child”
I wrecked the house that night I just went wild,
The next day we sat and spent it talking,
It boiled down to either I support her, or I start walking,
I left her for a while as I got my head together,
Remembering our wedding vows “unconditionally forever”
I told her that I would raise you as my own,
That we would never again discuss that night in our home,
You were never to be told, so many secrets so many lies,
But as you turn into a man I see "that man" in your eyes,
I love you, you are my son, we’ve shared tears and we’ve shared laughter,
It breaks my heart to say this, but son I’m not your father.

man! crying.gif dat s**t was bada** sorry for da stars im tryin' not to cuss i gave it up for lent lol but on da real dat was deep keep writin' u got talent on dat homeboy headbang.gif rolleyes.gif laugh.gif

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post Mar 8 2006, 11:14 PM
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THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK PEOPLE headbang.gif headbang.gif nicegoing.gif
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post Mar 9 2006, 01:05 AM
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yea it was good and sad unsure.gif smile.gif
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post Mar 9 2006, 10:10 PM
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QUOTE (babygirl313 @ Mar 8 2006, 08:05 PM)
yea it was good and sad unsure.gif smile.gif

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post May 9 2006, 11:22 PM
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i've read this somewhere else before, u sure it ain't copied?


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post May 9 2006, 11:30 PM
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post May 9 2006, 11:38 PM
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hmm... yea it's real familiar...


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